An Random poem for my english assignment ^^

My computer has been on a long journey and died.
BEEP BEEP it went and auto-matically shut down.
In an instant my hobby to chat online on the computer
was taken and vanished away from me.

I scream in agony as anger rages in my arms.
It has a mind of its own trying to revive the sacred computer.

Day after day, second after second my results shows me that the computer
doesen't entertain you, you entertain the computer. It shrieks and laughs at you, provoking you as you try to restore the system of the computer.

But..

Before you knew it, the computer drained fragments of your life turning it into nothing but nothing.
My computer has been on a long journey and died.
BEEP BEEP it went and auto-matically shut down is when i put on a golden crown and took master over the computer who was trying to put me down!.


HOW WAS IT?
RATE OUT OF 5 STAR ^^