My new song(piano)

I just thought.. what happen if i can make a very nice piano melody piece?

so.. my little sister thought i would give up~...

and so.. i got an intro.. and gave up after that....

but when i played the intro to my sister.. she said
" it sounds nice"

gave me hope.. and so i went on creating my body.. although... im not so creative and sure of the flow~.......

i've only been playing piano for around 1 year or so...

probably less....

so based on what music i've heard.. i tried combine it all into 1 song.. it'll be hard.. but i'll play once I F I N I S H !!!!!!!!